[PATCH] Website: Grammar in first paragraph.

[Ben McGinnes]

From 5d495931d0b4f6f1a4567b4c4902e5ff25b1fc0f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ben McGinnes <ben at adversary.org>
Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 15:52:08 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar in first paragraph.

* This paragraph tried to be English and almost made it in parts of
  one or two sentences ... and now does so in all of them.
* No doubt there will be more to find later.
* Thanks to @Error26914 on Twitter for the heads up on this bit.
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 web/index.org | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/web/index.org b/web/index.org
index 4fed715..db0271e 100644
--- a/web/index.org
+++ b/web/index.org
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
 #+index: Gpg4win
 
 GnuPG is a complete and free implementation of the OpenPGP standard as
-defined by [[https://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4880.txt][RFC4880]] (also known as /PGP/). GnuPG allows to encrypt and
-sign your data and communication, features a versatile key management
-system as well as access modules for all kinds of public key
+defined by [[https://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4880.txt][RFC4880]] (also known as /PGP/). GnuPG allows you to encrypt and
+sign your data and communications; it features a versatile key management
+system, along with access modules for all kinds of public key
 directories.  GnuPG, also known as /GPG/, is a command line tool with
-features for easy integration with other applications. A wealth of
+features for easy integration with other applications.  A wealth of
 [[file:software/frontends.html][frontend applications]] and [[file:software/libraries.html][libraries]] are available.  GnuPG also
 provides support for S/MIME and Secure Shell (ssh).
 
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