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--- ../share/src/gnupg/gnupg-1.0.1h/doc/DETAILS	Tue Jun 27 19:09:26 2000
+++ DETAILS	Sun Jul  2 19:13:02 2000
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
 	The signature key has expired.	No arguments yet.
 
     KEYREVOKED
-	The used key has been revoked by his owner.  No arguments yet.
+	The used key has been revoked by its owner.  No arguments yet.
 
     BADARMOR
 	The ASCII armor is corrupted.  No arguments yet.
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
     BEGIN_DECRYPTION
     END_DECRYPTION
 	Mark the start and end of the actual decryption process.  These
-	are also emmited when in --list-only mode.
+	are also emitted when in --list-only mode.
 
     BEGIN_ENCRYPTION
     END_ENCRYPTION
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
 	"char" is the character displayed with no --status-fd enabled, with
 	the linefeed replaced by an 'X'.  "cur" is the current amount
 	done and "total" is amount to be done; a "total" of 0 indicates that
-	the toatal amount is not known. 100/100 may be used to detect the
+	the total amount is not known.  100/100 may be used to detect the
 	end of operation.
 
     SIG_CREATED <type> <pubkey algo> <hash algo> <class> <timestamp> <key fpr>
@@ -263,31 +263,31 @@
 There is an experimental feature which allows for unattended
 generation of keys controlled by a parameter file.
 This feature is not very well tested and does only make sense for some
-very special applications.  Please don't complain if we decide to chnage
+very special applications.  Please don't complain if we decide to change
 the behaviour of this command.
 
 To use this feature, you use --gen-key together with --batch and feed the
-parameters either form stdin or from a file given on the commandline.
+parameters either from stdin or from a file given on the commandline.
 The format of this file is as follows:
   o Text only, line length is limited to about 1000 chars.
-  o You must use UTF-8 encoding to specifiy non-ascii characters.
-  o Empty lines are ignored
-  o Leading and trailing spaces are ignored
-  o A hash sign as the first non white space character indicates a comment line
+  o You must use UTF-8 encoding to specify non-ascii characters.
+  o Empty lines are ignored.
+  o Leading and trailing spaces are ignored.
+  o A hash sign as the first non white space character indicates a comment line.
   o Control statements are indicated by a leading percent sign, the
     arguments are separated by white space from the keyword.
   o Parameters are specified by a keyword, followed by a colon.  Arguments
-    are speparated by white space.
+    are separated by white space.
   o The first parameter must be "Key-Type", control statements
     may be placed anywhere.
   o Key generation takes place when either the end of the parameter file
     is reached, the next "Key-Type" parameter is encountered or at the
     controlstatement "%commit"
-  o Control staements:
+  o Control statements:
     %echo <text>
-	Print <text>
+	Print <text>.
     %dry-run
-	Suppress actual key generation (useful for syntax checking)
+	Suppress actual key generation (useful for syntax checking).
     %commit
 	Perform the key generation.  An implicit commit is done
 	at the next "Key-Type" parameter.
@@ -302,8 +302,8 @@
 	this file is created (and overwrites an existing one).
 	Both control statements must be given.
    o The order of the parameters does not matter except for "Key-Type"
-     which must be the first parameter.  The paramtyers are only for the
-     generated keyblock and paramters from previous key generations are not
+     which must be the first parameter.  The parameters are only for the
+     generated keyblock and parameters from previous key generations are not
      used. Some syntactically checks may be performed.
      The currently defined parameters are:
      Key-Type: <algo-number>|<algo-string>
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@
 	primary key. The algorithm must be capable of signing.
 	This is a required parameter.
      Key-Length: <length-in-bits>
-	Length of the key in bits.  Default is 1024
+	Length of the key in bits.  Default is 1024.
      Subkey-Type: <algo-number>|<algo-string>
 	This generates a secondary key.  Currently only one subkey
 	can be handled.
@@ -476,16 +476,16 @@
      1 u32    next   next sigrec of this uid or 0 to indicate the
 		     last sigrec.
      6 times
-	1 u32  Local_id of signators dir or shadow dir record
+	1 u32  Local_id of signatures dir or shadow dir record
 	1 byte Flag: Bit 0 = checked: Bit 1 is valid (we have a real
 			     directory record for this)
-			 1 = valid is set (but my be revoked)
+			 1 = valid is set (but may be revoked)
 
 
 
   Record type 8: (shadow directory record)
   --------------
-    This record is used to reserved a LID for a public key.  We
+    This record is used to reserve a LID for a public key.  We
     need this to create the sig records of other keys, even if we
     do not yet have the public key of the signature.
     This record (the record number to be more precise) will be reused
@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@
 +  future extensions. These length markers must be inserted into the data
 +  stream just before writing the data out.
 +
-+  This 2 byte filed is large enough, because the application must buffer
++  This 2 byte field is large enough, because the application must buffer
 +  this amount of data to prepend the length marker before writing it out.
 +  Data block sizes larger than about 32k doesn't make any sense. Note
 +  that this may also be used for compressed data streams, but we must use
@@ -633,8 +633,8 @@
 
 Usage of gdbm files for keyrings
 ================================
-    The key to store the keyblock is it's fingerprint, other records
-    are used for secondary keys.  fingerprints are always 20 bytes
+    The key to store the keyblock is its fingerprint, other records
+    are used for secondary keys.  Fingerprints are always 20 bytes
     where 16 bit fingerprints are appended with zero.
     The first byte of the key gives some information on the type of the
     key.
@@ -742,11 +742,11 @@
 keys.
 
 
-A better way to to this would be a request like:
+A better way to do this would be a request like:
 
    /pks/lookup/<gnupg_formatierte_user_id>?op=<operation>
 
-this can be implemented using Hurd's translator mechanism.
+This can be implemented using Hurd's translator mechanism.
 However, I think the whole key server stuff has to be re-thought;
 I have some ideas and probably create a white paper.
 

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--- ../share/src/gnupg/gnupg-1.0.1h/doc/FAQ	Mon Jun  5 21:34:34 2000
+++ FAQ	Mon Jul  3 14:35:42 2000
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
        gpg --rfc1991 --cipher-algo 3des ...
 
     Please don't pipe the data to encrypt to gpg but give it as a filename;
-    other wise, pgp 2 will not be able to handle it.
+    otherwise, pgp 2 will not be able to handle it.
 
  Q: How can I conventional encrypt a message, so that PGP can decrypt it?
  A: You can't do this for PGP 2.  For PGP 5 you should use this:
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
   we (on Linux the /dev/random device) must collect some random data.
   It is really not easy to fill the Linux internal entropy buffer; I
   talked to Ted Ts'o and he commented that the best way to fill the buffer
-  is to play with your keyboard. Good security has it's price. What I do
+  is to play with your keyboard.  Good security has its price.  What I do
   is to hit several times on the shift, control, alternate, and capslock
   keys, because these keys do not produce output to the screen. This way
   you get your keys really fast (it's the same thing pgp2 does).
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
      q = Undefined (no value assigned)
      n = Don't trust this key at all
      m = There is marginal trust in this key
-     f = The key is full trusted.
+     f = The key is full trusted
      u = The key is ultimately trusted; this
 	 is only used for keys for which
 	 the secret key is also available.
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
      other keys.  "validity", or calculated trust, is a value which
      says how much GnuPG thinks a key is valid (that it really belongs
      to the one who claims to be the owner of the key).
-     For more see the chapter "The Web of Trust" in the Manual
+     For more see the chapter "The Web of Trust" in the Manual.
 
   Q: How do I interpret some of the informational outputs?
   A: While checking the validity of a key, GnuPG sometimes prints
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@
      where pgpkeyring is the original keyring and not the GnuPG one you
      might have created in the first step.
 
-  Q: Are the headerlines of a cleartext signater part of the signed
+  Q: Are the headerlines of a cleartext signature part of the signed
      material?
   A: No.  For example you can add or remove "Comment:" lines.  They
      have a purpose like the mail header lines.  However a "Hash:"
@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@
   Q: PGP 5.x, 6.x does not like my secret key.
   A: PGP probably bails out on some private comment packets used by GnuPG.
      These packets are fully in compliance with OpenPGP; however PGP is not
-     really OpenPGP aware.  A workaround is to eport the secret keys with
+     really OpenPGP aware.  A workaround is to export the secret keys with
      this command:
 
 	gpg --export-secret-keys --no-comment -a your-key-id
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@
   A: You should use the option --batch and don't use passphrases as
      there is usually no way to store it more secure than the secret
      keyring itself.  The suggested way to create the keys for the
-     automated envirionment ist:
+     automated environment is:
 	On a secure machine:
 	1. If you want to do automatic signing, create a signing subkey
 	   for your key (edit menu, choose "addkey" and the DSA).
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@
 	   implementation)
 	3. gpg --export-secret-subkeys --no-comment foo >secring.auto
 	4. Copy secring.auto and the public keyring to a test directory.
-	5. Cd to this diectory
+	5. Cd to this diectory.
 	6. gpg --homedir . --edit foo
 	   and use "passwd" to remove the passphrase from the subkeys.
 	   You may also want to remove all unused subkeys.

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--- gpg.sgml	Thu Jul  6 00:17:48 2000
+++ -	Thu Jul  6 09:17:50 2000
@@ -805,7 +805,7 @@
 <listitem><para>
 Set the name of the native character set.  This is used
 to convert some strings to proper UTF-8 encoding.
-Valid values for &ParmName; are:</para>
+Valid values for &ParmName; are:</para></listitem>
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry>
 <term>iso-8859-1</term><listitem><para>This is the default Latin 1 set.</para></listitem>
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On Mon, 10 Jul 2000, Hideki Saito wrote:

> Of course, this is quite useless unless you can read Japanese ;)

Looks funny :-)

> Also, am I supporsed to use GnuPG logo? (If there's problem I'll 
> remove it right away)

No problem.

  Werner

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  Hi.  Enjoy the patch at the end.

  For me, ``anem muts'' was very tough!
I hope that it is the correct one.

--- gpg.sgml~	Sat Jul 22 20:21:05 2000
+++ gpg.sgml	Sun Jul 23 15:10:29 2000
@@ -160,8 +160,8 @@
 <term>--verify-files <optional><parameter/files/</optional></term>
 <listitem><para>
 This is a special version of the --verify command which does not work with
-detached signatures.  The command expects the files to bee verified either
-on the commandline or reads the filenames from stdin;  each anem muts be on
+detached signatures.  The command expects the files to be verified either
+on the commandline or reads the filenames from stdin;  each name must be on
 separate line. The command is intended for quick checking of many files.
 </para></listitem></varlistentry>
 
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@
 <listitem><para>
 Same as --export, but does export the secret keys.
 This is normally not very useful and a security risk.
-the second form of the command has the special property to
+The second form of the command has the special property to
 render the secret part of the primary key useless; this is
 a GNU extension to OpenPGP and other implementations can
 not be expected to successful import such a key.
@@ -770,8 +770,8 @@
 <varlistentry>
 <term>--keyring &ParmFile;</term>
 <listitem><para>
-Add &ParmFile to the list of keyrings.
-If &ParmFile begins with a tilde and a slash, these
+Add &ParmFile; to the list of keyrings.
+If &ParmFile; begins with a tilde and a slash, these
 are replaced by the HOME directory. If the filename
 does not contain a slash, it is assumed to be in the
 home-directory ("~/.gnupg" if --homedir is not used).
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@
 <term>--escape-from-lines</term>
 <listitem><para>
 Because some mailers change lines starting with "From "
-to "&#60;From " it is good to handle such lines in a special
+to "&#62;From " it is good to handle such lines in a special
 way when creating cleartext signatures. All other PGP
 versions do it this way too. This option is not enabled
 by default because it would violate rfc2440.
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@
 <listitem><para>
 GnuPG uses a file to store it's internal random pool over invocations.
 This makes random generation faster; however sometimes write operations
-are not desired.  This option can be used to achive that with the cost of
+are not desired.  This option can be used to achieve that with the cost of
 slower random generation.
 </para></listitem></varlistentry>
 
@@ -1297,7 +1297,7 @@
 Changes the output of the list commands to work faster; this is achieved
 by leaving some parts empty.  Some applications don't need the user ID and
 the trust information given in the listings.  By using this options they
-can get a faster listing.  The excact behaviour of this option may change
+can get a faster listing.  The exact behaviour of this option may change
 in future versions.
 </para></listitem></varlistentry>
 
@@ -1473,7 +1473,7 @@
 <listitem><para>
 Verify the signature of the file but do not output the data. The second form
 is used for detached signatures, where <parameter/sigfile/ is the detached
-signature (either ASCII armored of binary) and &OptParmFiles are the signed
+signature (either ASCII armored of binary) and &OptParmFiles; are the signed
 data; if this is not given the name of the file holding the signed data is
 constructed by cutting off the extension (".asc" or ".sig") of
 <parameter/sigfile/ or by asking the user for the filename.
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